Good and bad points

My vacation good points is to go to America. I could learn many things about America. I make many friends who are foreigners. I enjoyed staying with my host family. I could speak English positively. I'm not afraid of speaking English. I enjoyed taking communication with foreigners. I learned American culture. This summer vacation is many good points. I enjoyed summer vacation.

My vacation bad points are a little. First, I couldn't meet my friends who don't live in Kumamoto. They come back Kumamoto this summer, but I went to America. When I came back Japan, They came back their home.  (2435/12000)